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	<title>Comments on: Blogging: 10 Things To Do with A Bad Headline</title>
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		<title>By: On Twitter, A/B Analysis, and the Art of Headlines</title>
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		<dc:creator>On Twitter, A/B Analysis, and the Art of Headlines</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Oct 2009 13:36:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Headlines are critical. I&#8217;ve noted that, with some frustration (I&#8217;m not so good at headlines) on this blog before, here. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Headlines are critical. I&#8217;ve noted that, with some frustration (I&#8217;m not so good at headlines) on this blog before, here. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Gisli</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gisli</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Aug 2009 07:23:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writing headlines is like Haiku: terse, colorful, bold. Talk to the inner child, the guts 
If you write the whole article in headline-speak you better call it a &quot;poem&quot;.
Writing articles is a different things for different people. For me its structured, orderly, logical.  I do technical documentation. But  I enjoy reading motoring/sports/food journalism for the way the writers handle excitement. Don&#039;t get much of that in a technical specification for a network protocol.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing headlines is like Haiku: terse, colorful, bold. Talk to the inner child, the guts<br />
If you write the whole article in headline-speak you better call it a &#8220;poem&#8221;.<br />
Writing articles is a different things for different people. For me its structured, orderly, logical.  I do technical documentation. But  I enjoy reading motoring/sports/food journalism for the way the writers handle excitement. Don&#8217;t get much of that in a technical specification for a network protocol.</p>
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		<title>By: ALex</title>
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		<dc:creator>ALex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Jul 2009 01:31:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks so much Tim! Great post. Not only did it have sprinkles of humor, the tips are all applicable to various types of articles.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks so much Tim! Great post. Not only did it have sprinkles of humor, the tips are all applicable to various types of articles.</p>
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		<title>By: Tim Berry</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tim Berry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Jul 2009 18:22:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There, see? Headlines are so tough, but so important, and it takes talent. To Free or Not to Free would have been way better. Thanks Steve!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There, see? Headlines are so tough, but so important, and it takes talent. To Free or Not to Free would have been way better. Thanks Steve!</p>
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		<title>By: Steve</title>
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		<dc:creator>Steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Jul 2009 16:25:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Headlines are hard.  It is really rare when a publication uses my headline - they almost always change it.   And I know from feedback that my blog post headlines are not good.

I&#039;ve been getting headline advice from a friend who is a newspaper editor, but I don&#039;t seem to be getting any better.

BTW, I liked your post on Ideas.   Interesting mix of opinions and sources.  How about &quot;To Free or Not to Free?&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Headlines are hard.  It is really rare when a publication uses my headline &#8211; they almost always change it.   And I know from feedback that my blog post headlines are not good.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been getting headline advice from a friend who is a newspaper editor, but I don&#8217;t seem to be getting any better.</p>
<p>BTW, I liked your post on Ideas.   Interesting mix of opinions and sources.  How about &#8220;To Free or Not to Free?&#8221;</p>
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